No, time has rounded one full circle
Unchanged sentiments circled in same mode
Don’t call me Baby Please!
Glimpses on my eyes; is it a sign of repentance?
Discarded then recharged again dishearten
All leafs of Life has fallen down,
One by One, One after another
Can a leafless waterless Life bequeath the shadow of love?
Black nights are still Black in despair
Without Light, Love and Lust
Only waiting a solitude soul
In the desire of the very Salvation
Oh Man! Rise up at least once and feel the pain
Are you alive in the monotonous 24*7?
You walk thousand miles in dreams each time
As you love to sleep with me in delusion
The same ten digits stopped coming in
Outgoing nowhere to be found the Old given name
Revisited the oldest mails I can experience Us
In Green Light, Good morning mail and Goodnight Kiss!
After rounded One Circle Complete
Your presence is breathing in eyes, mind & miss
Silence can’t be response of Love
No call for motionless stillness Love
Compensate One round of complete,taken the Life of Yesterday.......
SILENCE CAN BE RESPONSE OF LOVE---- IF IT COMES FROM WITHIN/ WHEN LOVE CHIRPS-- WORDS FADE-- SILENCE-- BRIGHTS IN SHINE
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JUST FEEL IT-- IN-- SILENCE-- AND WITHIN
------ ALEEK
SILENCE FOR ME CAN NOT BE THE EXPRESSION OF LOVE..I WANA CONFESS MY FEELING UTMOST TO MY LOVE..TIME DOESN'T STOP FOR SILENCE LOVE...IN PRACTICAL VIEW WE SHOULD CONFESS TO THE PERSON THE VERY SENTIMENTS ON RIGHT TIME...OTHERWISE ONLY REPENTANCE WOULD BE EXITED WITH US.....AND I CANT REPENT ON PAST..NEVER!
ReplyDeleteWORDS OF LOVE-- TO BE FELT IN HEART-- NOT TO BE HEARD.
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ALL THOSE PAUSE OF SILENCE-- MAKES THE WORDS OF LOVE-- MEANINGFUL--- UNENDING--- POEM.
------- ALEEK.
Silence is a mode of Platonic Love.And here the subject entirely based on passionate & real actions.Here the beloved wants to have her Lovers reactions,compassionate love before the Times goes too late..whatever U have defined is not related to the subject of the very Poem.Its True in platonic aspects but passionate love demands Reactions for fulfilling right action in right time....I wanted to depict the realistic aspect of Love,If One will be Silent in the time of Confession,then How Could you able to confess your Beloved that 'I Love U , Don't Leave me Ever'??
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ReplyDeleteIT IS TOO DIFFICULT TO EXPRESS THE DEEPEST FEELINGS OF HEART.....NO WORDS,ARE ABLE TO EXPRESS THEM PERFECTLY....EXCEPT THE WORDS OF SILENCE.......
ReplyDeleteBUT YOU MUST HAVE YOUR OWN FEELINGS TO HEAR IT....THAT IS CALLED REAL LOVE....
-Sucheta
As the Poem 'yesterday' is concerned there is already persists a Silent Love..The beloved wants to break the silence of her lover and speak out his feelings for their relationship...I didn't judge Love as Fundamentally..Silence cant be the word here when They both Need to Speak Out for the sake of their Relationship..Thats why I have Used ''Silence Cant be Response of Love'' just feel as per the Poem is concerned,not in a fundamental aspect.....Thanks for your Analysis...Keep visiting....:-) Senjuti..
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